There it is - what would you do to make it better?

10/4/2006 2:30:22 PM

1.) theres no way youll get the liscensing for the logos, go ahead and take them both out.
2.) we be packin?

gayy


this, this is really bad, im sorry

10/4/2006 2:34:14 PM

"we be packin" is trademarked by unc

10/4/2006 2:35:56 PM

NCSU does not = Hurricanes.

10/4/2006 2:38:12 PM

That looks really lame and cheesy.

The image is pretty badly scaled (it's very blocky), the cheesy clipart beer bottle rammed in the wolf's mouth looks retarded. The Hurricane symbol behind the wolf doesn't make any sense. The text design of the "Packs a punch" is really cheesy and generic looking (looks like stock WordArt or some effect you see in Gimp).

10/4/2006 2:43:24 PM

Pay someone to do it if you're serious about it. I know a firm who would do it on the cheap real quick because they're all Pack fans, but you've also got a whole design college here.

10/4/2006 2:46:42 PM

^i wouldn really call what we have a design college - its just for some home brew bottles if anything

10/4/2006 2:47:56 PM

use a sharpie and label it "BEER", it would be a massive improvement over the visual diahrrea you have going on up there

10/4/2006 2:47:58 PM

^^ Yeah, you wouldn't...but the people who have a fucking clue would.

10/4/2006 2:50:05 PM

^^^ That is fing retarded to say. Yes we do have a DESIGN college and a damn fine one.

PS Your label needs some flames.

[Edited on October 4, 2006 at 2:51 PM. Reason : asdf]

10/4/2006 2:51:21 PM

you fucks crack me up

10/4/2006 2:51:43 PM

yeah i must say, don't show anyone else this horrible creation

10/4/2006 2:53:26 PM

it looks like an energy drink!

10/4/2006 2:56:35 PM

Webepakin has to be the gayest slogan ever. Please tell me you can come up with something better than that. Or maybe you could distribute it to Legends.

"Wolfbock Ale" is actually pretty decent. But that's about it. And you don't need Tuffy drinking a beer...he's already on the fucking beer logo, we get the point.

[Edited on October 4, 2006 at 2:58 PM. Reason : .]

10/4/2006 2:56:59 PM

How about Wolfweizen? and scrap the Hurricanes logo and ditch the beer bottle.

[Edited on October 4, 2006 at 3:01 PM. Reason : asdf]

10/4/2006 3:00:10 PM

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""Wolfbock Ale" is actually pretty decent"

but but,

a bock isnt an ale at all.

thats a very appley orange youve got there

10/4/2006 3:06:44 PM

I was just saying it looks good...

10/4/2006 3:12:49 PM

that is so pixelated and badly cut i feel like i'm playing the Mr. T nintendo game.

if you can't use good quality graphics of the wolf thing and whatever that is behind him, use a white background for that part, like a stripe that wraps around that part of the label so you can't see the jagged edges.

10/4/2006 3:40:39 PM

Quote :

"i wouldn really call what we have a design college"

Are you being facetious?

10/4/2006 3:53:47 PM

so this took you what, 5 minutes to make?

10/4/2006 4:24:05 PM

this took about 3 min



[Edited on October 4, 2006 at 4:26 PM. Reason : ]

10/4/2006 4:26:15 PM

You can't use Tuffy; you can't use the Hurricane's logo.

Webepakin is weaker than spoofs on [Got Milk?]

Why not something simple like "Wolfpack Brewing Company"? If you're trying to sell something that embraces both NCSU and the Hurricanes, try "Trinity Road Brewers".

Wolfbock is cool, but a bock is not an ale.

You could do multiple brews like Wolfbock Lager, Wolfpack Wheat Ale, Catagory 4 Quadrupel Ale, or Brickyard Blonde Ale.

The scroll on top is nice, but repeat it on the bottom...the flame thing does not go with the scroll. The border is ok. "Packs a punch!" is in horrible script...the gradient only makes it worse.

A good image would be an arist's rendering of the waterfall wolf statue. You could take that picture yourself and manipulate it in photoshop using outline and other filters and likely get away with it.

[Edited on October 4, 2006 at 4:35 PM. Reason : ]

10/4/2006 4:33:26 PM

^Thats some good constructive criticism. Sometimes, TWW actually surprises me

10/4/2006 4:59:19 PM

BTW, I'm a marketing professional and I expect to be paid for my services...in free beer

10/4/2006 5:10:59 PM

The truth comes out!

10/4/2006 5:15:42 PM

I know this sounds mean, but if you created that and had to ask for constructive criticism then you're probably better off telling someone else your idea and getting them to do the design from scratch.

It's like building a shack in the woods and asking for advice on how to turn it into a respectable house.

Sorry.

10/4/2006 5:25:10 PM

or perhaps like posting a vague analogy and expecting it to increase someone elses photoshop skillz

10/4/2006 7:10:18 PM

Visually, it needs to be erased and started over. HOWEVER, this is not a bad idea.

GG.

10/4/2006 7:23:45 PM

I'm pretty sure Mr. Wuf is trademarked or something ... anyway, not available for use on a beer label

10/4/2006 7:34:51 PM

What about using a picture of the belltower instead of the wolf? Or something else around campus that can be recognized as being from State?

10/4/2006 7:38:52 PM

Brickenbock

10/4/2006 7:39:59 PM

^"fills you up like a ton of bricks" ?

10/4/2006 7:55:53 PM

Those old school cartoons with the wolf chasing after that white girl would make a great logo.

Webepakin - stacked like a brick house

10/4/2006 8:00:12 PM

call it "Brickyard Ale" or something state students would like.

dont call it Oblinger! (sp?)

[Edited on October 4, 2006 at 8:19 PM. Reason : bricks]

10/4/2006 8:17:51 PM

that is terrible design work, I would suggest hiring a professional

It would be worth it

10/4/2006 9:32:22 PM

I'd never consume a beverage fermented by people who thought that this was a good logo.

10/4/2006 9:44:37 PM

awful

10/4/2006 10:08:34 PM

I never look at the logo anyway.

10/4/2006 11:23:53 PM

I like how ncsu is tribal now, reminds me of all the black kids on campus

10/4/2006 11:28:47 PM

get some naked bitches on the label

10/5/2006 12:14:40 AM

use higher quality graphics, and put the beer in the wolf's hand, instead of his mouth. Then it would look halfway decent for use on home brew.

Take a picture if you ever actually do it.

10/5/2006 12:51:53 AM

10/5/2006 2:10:29 AM

if you're really serious about it, I'll help ya out

but yes, it's pretty bad. nice effort, though

10/5/2006 9:30:46 AM

so this was a joke right? because this couldnt be serious. looks like a retarded 10 year old was playing with MS Paint.

10/5/2006 9:35:34 AM

^nice try

10/5/2006 10:18:20 AM

so youre actually serious? wow.

10/5/2006 10:22:32 AM

good grief, this is for homebrew people, not like he's about to roll out nationally


i think 2.0 is really cute. what kind of beer is it, a generic amber?

you should go to CARBOY meetings, the raleigh homebrewer's club

the older guys are real awesome, and we're trying to get more young people involved in it

every 4th wednesday

10/5/2006 4:40:14 PM

the second one is better, I still think the beer in the wolf's mouth looks stupid though

10/5/2006 4:42:45 PM

Quote :

"^nice try"

no offense, but its not like we are saying this to be douchebags, it seriously is a really shitty design

10/5/2006 4:48:08 PM

just to clarify...mine was a parody

10/5/2006 6:31:59 PM